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108 Summer by projectTiGER 108 Summer by projectTiGER
108 Summer
Comments and critique always appreciated


I like boyish Rin a lot (●´∀`●)
Playing with colors

Pose reference from the fantastic *SenshiStock

Artwork © Nichol CLH .//projectTiGER 2013
Kagamine Rin+Len © Crypton Future Media
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Yes, I love your shading on everything. You even got the shadows! You were able to see exactly where the light would hit, and shadows would cast, and that is something I am horrible at. I especially like the detailing in the hair,another thing i am unable to do, it looks very realistic. One thing that looks kind of awkward is the fold yous created on her back, to represent her slouching. They are a little to pointed, as are the fold on her stomach. If you fix those I feel like it would bring out the slouching pose more. Passed out in a dark corner totally represents me right now XD
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A very cute and beautiful artwork. I really appreciate the originality. The textures look very realistic like real flesh. The shadows look perfect. The look on Rin's face is AWESOME sista!*voice changes*. At first I was like 'O-o beautiful100%tothefullestwaybetterthanme!' The shows amiming was perfect. You had exactly castled them on their appropriate places, that just one thing I, myself is horrible at. There was one more thing I found odd was

'Androids can do the "Fu-Sion-HA!" which Goku and Vegeta do together.

I also like that really cute and funny and cunning and 'kukuku' look on Boyish Rin's face. It's just waaay too adorable.

In all, this artwork has received 4.8 star rating
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Marcotonio-desu Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
Her face look a bit off-center, talking with a friend she suggested the neck is a bit too much backwards.

Other than that, lovely painting. with a striking hot atmosphere, even though the colors are rather cold. You know, Tigera, you have the best palettes. u.u
Maybe a bit of red on the watermelons would be nice as well, though. Specially if you do a subsurface scattering effect with it (Google Image it now!).
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projectTiGER Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Arghhh sometimes all it takes is someone to point it out and then you can't unsee it a;lsdjakljds How on earth did I miss the neck thing;;;;;;
Subsurface scattering was a fantastic read!( I had no idea it was a name, I always figured it..was just.."that glowy thing where light sort of seeps through" )

On a small side note I really appreciate you going through my old works and leaving helpful comments (how many times have I thanked you now? Not enough that's for sure!) because it's easier to see your own work more critically after a while ; D 
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Marcotonio-desu Jul 23, 2013  Student Filmographer
It's really a nice thing to see a big batch of pictures in a row, cause I see all the evolution throughout the semester. But it's a shame I can't give enough attention to all the pieces; you are one of the few artists I actually opened one by one to look at, most people I just go opening the interesting thumbnails only.

I hope I won't have to do it again soon, it's been 8000 items in my inbox to clean and now it's really narrowed down to under 1000.

I was talking with a friend while I wrote my comments on your art, and she's done these fixes, but was too shy to post them up... xD
I can't explain it properly, she's the magician, but I guess looking at it might already help a bit. :3

On a final note, that Rin & Len I commented on about your new style, it seems like you didn't stick with it at all in the end, huh? I see you keep using harder lines on faces so they pop out better, but the whole linearted style didn't get past that drawing. Looking back at it now, do you like it?
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projectTiGER Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm flattered! (*´∀`*) and yes sigh I know that feeling;; I haven't been very active on dA and the things in my inbox just..keep...piling...up;;;;

I see! It did help a lot, especially the persepctive one! Would you mind passing my thanks to her?



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Yume-chan98 Jun 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Really, really wonderful *--*
I absolutely love your works <3<3<3
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projectTiGER Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it! :la: 
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Yume-chan98 Jul 10, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome <3<3<3
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Miss-Mae Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So gorgeous, yet again! Your colouring just seems to get better and better!
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projectTiGER Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahhhhh thank you so much! :dummy: 
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