It's a really nice piece, that shows a lot of emphasis of the idea. It's a nice drawing of the kagamine twins, nice colors, nice mixture, minimalist shading, and etcetera. But, the expression in Len's face seems kinda off, and some of the background seems kinda empty. some of the shading seems to be really rushed, like it wanted to be ready in 30-40 minutes, but... it's kinda strange, because, it's doesn't affect too much the composition. Also, I have to highlight the cake, because it's really nicely done, all the textures on it, seems to be really well worked! It's a nice piece,It can be always be improved Good job as well!
Hi =projectTiGER !! That picture evoques a cute feeling and is very beautiful itself so i decided to give you my critique.
- The light coloring enhances the cute feeling. - The watercolors effect improves the details sensation. - The colored lights of some zones improve the tranquility feeling. - The faces of the Kagamine characters are very cute and very well done. - The reflections on the table create a beautiful polished cristal effect. - Beautiful transparency effects on the Mikus hand sleeves. - The hair is very well done and shaded.
- The angle of the cake, if you imagine the vanishing point behind the sofa just on the center on the screen and you imagine the lines that born fron that point utill the external watcher passing for that cake and imagining that those lines contain it, you would understand that the up part of the cake should be visible.
Could be improved:
- The cake problem. - The grey background behind the sofa could have more details like some piece of furniture.