For It's her OC, Ashe. Uh...I do think I changed his outfit a bit too much though OTL FORGIVE ME PLEASE.
It was a LOT of fun, especially the revolver bit. I know nothing about firearms..so if you see something wrong, do share. I haven't done a pure pen piece for quite a while now, so it was really REALLY fun to do; I like messy pen pieces a little too much.
I love the textures in this I love textures period. I'm not feeling very flowery today to this is going to be a little choppy.
This picture makes me think of a western setting and I think the cross hatching works well with this piece (although it's starting to become a crutch of sorts for you). I think you need to put more creases in the jacket and hat because it doesn't read quite right; but all the light seems to be coming from the same direction so to that. Maybe another bit of cross hatching in the glove where the forefinger meets the back of the hand and thumb too because it looks a little flat.
I want to say that the head needs to come more to the right but I'm not too sure about that one... I would say pull the right shoulder back a little because with the collar of the jacket it looks a little big. The goggle that's going around the hat on the right side seems to be a part of the hat right there because it's not really popping out.
Did I mention I liked the diagonal composition?! Sorry if that's like uber repetitive and vague... I'm not with it!
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so that antique look is the work of a texture brush? Gosh it's really fitting for this cowboy~ I really like it o__o ohh yess pen sketches are amazing, I like doing them now and then as well~
as for the revolver, nice~~~ All I can say is maybe it could have been drawn bigger, but i'm NOT one to judge proportions, since I apparently already fail at it x'DDD I guess the canal? neck? ....snout? of the gun should be straighter, but it still looks awesome, since you rendered it well, so it makes up for it
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I love the textures in this
This picture makes me think of a western setting and I think the cross hatching works well with this piece (although it's starting to become a crutch of sorts for you). I think you need to put more creases in the jacket and hat because it doesn't read quite right; but all the light seems to be coming from the same direction so
I want to say that the head needs to come more to the right but I'm not too sure about that one... I would say pull the right shoulder back a little because with the collar of the jacket it looks a little big. The goggle that's going around the hat on the right side seems to be a part of the hat right there because it's not really popping out.
Did I mention I liked the diagonal composition?!
Sorry if that's like uber repetitive and vague... I'm not with it!
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I really like it o__o
ohh yess pen sketches are amazing, I like doing them now and then as well~
as for the revolver, nice~~~
All I can say is maybe it could have been drawn bigger, but i'm NOT one to judge proportions, since I apparently already fail at it x'DDD
I guess the canal? neck? ....snout? of the gun should be straighter, but it still looks awesome, since you rendered it well, so it makes up for it
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